With this chop, I surprised myself ...

This is my first total rebrush out well. Basically, everything except wheels, grille, headlights and background (which was however slightly modified) were brush. I'm sure you will like it and, who knows, maybe I do deserve a promotion...
Base:

Chop:

Don't ask for a promotion... >.>
It's actually good but very blurry. some parts look flat/silly/jagged/wrong.
Front rim looks funny, fix the shadow.
Stop using the lassoo tool/whatever is giving you those angled selections
fix the rear wheel well. it's annoying me.
keep trying

Tanks ...

Other comments?

The whole chop is quite blurry and the reflections looked too sharp and has alot of jagged lines.

- Lots of sharp edges
- blurry as already v´been told
- missing shadows under the wheels
- much grubby looking parts


About begging 4 promotion

- Its not the amount of post somebody spend each day
- It is also not a question of time

It is and that is 100 % on ever other Chooping Board on Earth
only the improvement from one project to another.
There should be visible and clear looking changes ......

Try to keep your focus on your qualityenhancement.
It is not a contest against time. To promote this chop it
isnt my job and i do nont have the right to judge it, but it wont
be fair to the opposite Users, which have been done more
and much clean stuff.....

I dearly suggest you to get a new chop started with
much less changes, but clear and neat done....
Start up study the TUTs over and over again...
That is the only way to success....

Kind regards

Update:

What have you changed ???

I only want to help you <_<

Here are some examples what is still bad, worse, whatever......

The red Line shows you what your mainproblem is.
The whole shape is extremely jagged.
I have played with contrast, so it is more clear to see.

Just try to do one thing and do it clear....
Maybe 4 example only lowering. There are billions
of tuts on the www. It aint that hard. Try to mark
your lines with the pentool and not with the worthless
Lassothing....Zoom very close....

Nobody wants to see a complete chop with every feature
in the entrence lvl......as i told a few weeks ago.....

Here is the example...
Dont be afraid... i hosted this pic on my privat account, so if
you want it deleted, i will do it immediately.....


http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/7056/1036n.jpg

nots good mate,
very toony, al low res.
needs shadow and better selections, i think you isnt using pen tool.
cya

well despite its flaws i think that it is a nice concept.

blurry >>>> but goood