hi every one
after The WTB Round1 finish i want to have fun with new chop
i loved the base for the Rx so i wont to see what can i do on it
any way this is a full brushed chop
i hope you like it

orig :


By maxvan
wip :

By maxvan at 2011-03-20

after :

By maxvan

after hig res :
http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/5411/afterhighres.jpg

comments are welcome ^^

hey! love it:) i will say i prefer the kit on the original though,isnt it a URAS Type 4 kit?

hhh will iam with you i also love the org kit and i just want to re brushed it again with the same kit
but i thought it will be good to make a small change on it

thanks mate for the comment

no problem:D and i love the puddle reflection,i have never attempted that

good work altough the fail is in the shade the back wheel it's with very space.. It should be but you die the car in general i like it!

hay ks use your imagination
it's got i huge monster v8 engine under the hood this make it more lower from the front
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any way thanks man the point's

ahh yes,imagination the endless wonders that chopping can bring

Very good!

I like your brushing, it's very smooth and the reflections are done nicely.

However there are a few things that could be improved:

• Doorlines - they look too thick and around the arches they aren't perfectly round (try using some of the shapes in photoshop and warping them to fit and then use the stroke path option)
  
• Tires - they're low resolution and have a blue/green hue to them. Their colour should match the carbon arch
  
• Lazy selections - there are some wobbly and sharp selections all over the place. Especially near the arches and around the front vents
  
• Ground reflection - this is very difficult to pull off well, so I don't blame you for not getting it perfect. However, if you trace a vertical line through the image each area should correspond closely to it's point along the line:
  
  As you can see you're slightly out with these reflections. I feel that if you stretched the reflection vertically a bit more it could be better. Also I see you've blurred the car slightly in the reflection which isn't necessary (just look at how sharp the background looks in the reflection). Still on the reflection, I feel that the slightly wet parts of the road (not the puddles) could do with a slight touch of orange as these would still be reflecting the car ever so slightly.

There's not much else worth pointing out, these were just some things that took my attention. There is other stuff such as the shadow around the rear tyre which I could have pointed out, but they're relatively minor errors.

Good job, I'll rate you a 7/10 which I think is a fair score based on the other chops in this forum. For me, a 5-7 is an average chop in this forum, while a 8-9 is bordering on Pro Tuner. Keep at it

thanks klaus for the point's
it will make me avoid this mistakes on the next chop
thanks again man

hhhhhhh yah man