not bad not bad, i prefer the version without the wheels/rims. (probably because i like sketches rather than finished pieces, they have more character)
however another reason is that the wheels are tbh, rubbish, compared to the rest, where do they disappear to? also the rims aren't the best, boring design and they look like they are rushed(shading/highlighting wise)
however you do have talent, keep it up. I look forward to seeing your next work
