ferrari 458 italia

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tune:
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HR:http://i63.servimg.com/u/f63/15/13/08/63/ferrar16.jpg

promotion??
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Once again, your problem is, that you do some things great and some things sloppily.
While the whole front is very well done, apart from some bad edges on the upper end of the air intakes, and the sideskirt is awesome (despite being a bit toony), it looks like it took you 10 seconds to cut out the wheels - both added up. It is definitely not to difficult for you to cut out wheels properly, and as they really fit well, the chop would look a lot better if you would have used 2 minutes more for that part.
A new background would have been nice, though not completely necessary.
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thanks u give the best C+C.
and sorry bout wheels
REDO THEM :'(
We cant take you serious if you wont take a minute to select something :/

Hue of the rims should be more yellow than the blue/cyan they are now. Would be nice to have the vents filled with...something.
Dont give up though xD
first of all i think you should not focus on promotion or ask for it
people find that annoying , trust me if your good enough it will be noticed and you wil be promoted
(all ment well / friendly)

but if i would have to awnser the promotion question i would have to say no , not intermidiate worthy

why ?

the selections are messy you need to really take time selecting and (zoom in maybe?)
also you need to learn about feather settings because the lines are very very choppy (zigzag)

try to set the box in the top witch says feather to 0,5 for tight selections >> then feather 1 for smooth stuff (more blurry outlined) and 2-3 or 4 for reflection lines and stuff like that

for now try out 1,5 for selecting

also zoon in and select in small steps trying to keep round edges in corners

you could try to learn the pen tool in a tutorial or at least use the eliptical tool for repairing bends and lines that are not round


then you also need to learn more about shading and highlighting.....


well its a lot maybe but its ment very well

for now you need a lot of practice to grow status wise on autemo

but the best advice is forget inter-pro or beginner status and focus on chopping , have fun take all the time you need , perfect things

ask people for advice by starting a wip thread and take stuff people say and use them to make your chop better (not this one but a wip chop)


i hope you can use this all :-d
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cheers rich
hey mate...
I have only few things to say:
Front looks cool :)
and side skirt looks cool :)
but, ...
You need to take time for selecting,It looks like you select wheels in 10 seconds :(
Try to change background and make it clear,then do best of you and change rims slowly and clear,then change front or side if you want,but remember,Don`t hurry!...
and like rich say: Don`t ask for promotion too much,if you are good,you will be promoted ;)
keep it up :-d
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hmm zanimljiv chop, mada malo mi se ne svidja stil izrade, malo bi izmenio to, ali sve u svemu dobar chop uz nekoliko gresaka manjih :-d
in english any1??
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hmm zanimljiv chop, mada malo mi se ne svidja stil izrade, malo bi izmenio to, ali sve u svemu dobar chop uz nekoliko gresaka manjih :-d

(Daj covece,pisi na engleskom,nezna on sta ti pises xD)
English please! He can`t read Serbian! xD :D
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