MOVED: corsa

heres base:
baseco11.jpg

done:
davt_i10.jpg

HR:
http://i23.servimg.com/u/f23/15/13/08/63/davt_i11.jpg
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Quick chop? Wip? Sorry not enough finished for my taste. Doesn't seem inter for me even though this is your first here. Exhaust is blurry and the color reflecting doesn't come from anywhere. The lower valence is toony and the headlight cover isn't cleanly shaded.

I think this is more a quick chop imho
92% of the teenage population has moved on to rap. if you are part of the 8% that stayed with rock, put this in your profile
ok thanks
I have to agree with chopperkid.
Not too much done, and not very clean either, your last chops were better.
The headlight cover is good.
But this tow-hook is cut out really sloppy and you somehow forgot the line between the fender and the front bumper.
The brushing around the rear wheel is very toony.
The wheels themselves fit great, as well as the sidepipes.
The sideskirt is just a flat bar though - not good.
And what has happended to the rear wheel that stands further away? You cut out a piece of it.
Furthermore, just take a look at the upper edge of the picture...you'll see some things are doubled.
What you've done around the front wheel also seems unfinished.
The HUD is a nice idea, but has a wrong perspective.
To summarize it: Ask an admin to move this thread to the WIP-section and invest another 2 or three hours to finish all the mods properly, maybe find a more interesting bg. Then you'll have a very nice chop I think. At the moment it is deep in the new choppers area.
Post edited October 15, 2010 at 07:09:14 AM by Closed 24-7
You know you wanna click it!
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Little bit. If you have worked more on it, could be much nicer...
This isn't inter, it's novice. All flaws mentioned, good luck with your next chop.

Demoted to Novice.
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