NIssan Silvia S15

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^#1 Posted September 19, 2010 at 03:35:55 AM

Hello everyone! here's my latest creation .... and my first total brush! I hope you like ...
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tuning:

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tuning with effects:

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I thank all those who helped me and especially Noxcoupè Andyx73!

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Bem Design

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^#2 Posted September 19, 2010 at 03:40:27 AM

Potevi curarla un pochino di più perchè l'inizio era stupendo.. Ti sei stancato troppo presto

Nice work man!

Gianluca97

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^#3 Posted September 19, 2010 at 04:21:58 AM

in che senzo potevo curarla un pò di + bem?

thx for the comment Bem!

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^#4 Posted September 19, 2010 at 05:21:39 AM

This car looks like transparent on this bg.

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^#5 Posted September 19, 2010 at 06:15:56 AM

very nice chop with few mistakes...this chop deserve promotion

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^#6 Posted September 19, 2010 at 08:38:41 PM

- Car in overall could have more highlights and shadows
- The reflections of the clouds are too exposed
- Shadow undercar should be more deifned and more seen

Nice chop for a starter, keep those comments in mind and you will soon get better

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^#7 Posted September 19, 2010 at 10:36:22 PM

thx for the comments...I hope that will improve thanks to your advice!

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^#8 Posted September 20, 2010 at 01:01:34 AM

Excellent... However I cant see a doorline (or is just my eyes lol)

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^#9 Posted September 20, 2010 at 01:36:38 AM

Ash you're right! I forgot to do it! thanks!

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