Orig:


Chop:

well...
first of all practice a lot on layers' cutting and use magnetic lasso tool if you are using another tool (it's much more easier!)..
then,there are too much jaggy lines,you need to make them much more smoother using highlights,shadows etc..
I also can see many wrong perspectives,and many parts look too "boxy".

So,be careful with cutting thing,practice on your brushing to make it smoother and more beautiful and take your time on the perspective to make your chops' scheme look correct and nice

If you have difficulties,post on the wips' session to take advices from other choppers while you are working on something..

Something last,take more time on your chops,don't make them in hurry

keep up working

first the boxy parts... I just rebrush them... under all the layers of brushing is the layer with the original red magnum... i just make the other layers invisible, then make a selection, pick a color and brush... just rebrush m8... if it is boxy, than the original parts are boxy too
second: I doesn't use one layer or two... i used about 30-35 layers
third: There are maybe just one or two "jaggy lines", because I use pen tool... not lasso tool i don't think that it's better to use the magnetic lasso tool
somethink last from me too... i wouldn't take more tim on my chops... two weeks... every day from 1,5 to 2 hours working just on one car is enought for me
have a nice day

whatever you think dude,I'm just trying to help..

Several errors in lighting, too much use of reflection horizon. Clipping error on the wheels and they are with a different tone and illumination of the scene. Some parts are poorly finished. As the hood that seems welded to bodywork and the roof does not have any finish. Besides the design of the entrances of the bumper are square, are outside the center.

Do not get me wrong, take my comments as criticism. Frankly I do not like your chop, the car lost all the characteristics and lost beauty. Try brushing some parts of cars and use c/p to master lighting and shading. After a while you will make a fine one fulbrush .

About you reply to Spirus: We are here to comment, critique, see, love, hate and sometimes: Help. Seems rather to have fewer layers but does not define either the final work since you can group them later. And a 'normal' fullbrush carries some 190 to 350 layers.

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Sorry but, have to say this, this TOO many mistake here..

please, use reference pict in chopping, it usefull to make the result much better..

chop isn't just 1 or 2 hours mate, it takes more time than that if u're serious focusing on detail, even if toon, it should better detail in order to make it proportional..

I watch this thread from beginning, and looks like u've have a bad attitude for anyone who trying help u..