Mini Cooper 99

This is my chop.C+C appreciated.

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Post edited August 24, 2010 at 09:48:24 PM by Ta2man
Have no fear of perfection, You will never achieve it! [Salvador Dali]
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The brush looks very toony :-q
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dude, you don't need to put :-q in every post, it's REALLY demotivational.
Hey Ta2man, i did this to help you.
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1. The front bumper is not really in good perspective, you should see how.
2. The rims are wrong, you've done the blur so that the brakes, etc are perfect circles but the actual rims are ovals.
3. You should put some mesh here because it looks unrealistic.
4. The fuel cap is basically black and looks like a hole in the side of the car.
5. The carbon pattern looks really bad in these areas... too distorted.
6. (The wavy lines between black & orange) your transitions are all jaggy and not really smooth
7. Why is there a shadow here?

The brushing is pretty good, but use the original as a uide instead of just brushing randomly.

Good try! :-d
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couldnt put it better mate, ta2man save that pick and the comment and take it all on bored and start with brushing small things or rebrushing things at first, then work up to a full brush :)
Thanx for the input sarge. Your comments are noted well. I get eager on projects do to my idea and things just slip by. I know more attention and research. Thanx again.
Have no fear of perfection, You will never achieve it! [Salvador Dali]
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