Yamaha r6 cartoon style

Hi men yesterday i work in this motorbike is totally rebrush what do you think?

Base:
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Chop:
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:) comments pleaseeee
Post edited March 01, 2010 at 03:53:48 AM by Freddy-33
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well the issues are a bit obvious ..i will try to explain so you can use the comment for the next time :-d

first the selections are very choppy , jagged , try to work with different feather settings , maybe choose 0,2 for the main selections (instead of 0)
you can set this in the box above

then you rebrushed the bike but why are the dimensions and proportions changed ?
the rear wheel looks like the bike has been in a accident (best way to describe)
its off now

the front whel has got the same issue , also lack of shading (like on the front fender) makes it toutch the tyre

you should <if you dont change stuff and keep the bike as it> is work like this :

make sure the size is at least 2000x... pix or bigger , great quality (because its a re-brush and your a beginner so that works best)

then really zoom in so you can still see what you do but everything is clear

then take time on selections , one of the most important things
best is to master the pentool , i myslf never use that and my hand and eye are so steady i can work with the polygonal tool (also use the eliptoical tool a lot)
but thats just your own choice

most people when mastering the pen tool will get the best results :-d

take a good look at the light area's and dark area's

you could keep a master pic and when you brushed a peice look at the master for guidence to where the lighter area's and darker aerea's should be

basicly this re-brushing is painstaking boring work where you will only get a great result when you really hang in there and take the time

hope its usefull for you ?
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I think that you have not understood my chop ......... :(

I know that the wheels seem to have had an accident but this effect as I gave him on purpose to make it seem less realistic ......

rerbush the toon and is very saturated and I did it on purpose ....

see also this picture:
http://lh5.ggpht.com/_S79ZvaGGwRg/Sgz3k-YZWGI/AAAAAAAABy4/ZP2m6Ou0XGo/zx14toon.jpg did not realistic .....

I hope that the next time you'll understand this ....... o.O
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nice toon...you herad mistakes..
http://www.autemo.com/forums/?t=9529 ***NEW CHOP FROM TURBO DESIGN***
god idea, but u beter try do same as org, and if is this a toon, u post in wrong section :)
god idea, but u beter try do same as org, and if is this a toon, u post in wrong section :)
thanx noise024,sed you comment comment here:
http://www.autemo.com/forums/?t=2918
Post edited February 28, 2010 at 10:12:15 PM by Freddy-33
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nice idea, pretty original!
mistakes have been mentioned above
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My dA
if its cartoon what you where after imo its also not like that
sorry but i now understand what you where after

itas not called toon but cartoon style

this involves way more distortion if the proportions and does not eman makinf stuff look off angle wise :-d
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