Subaru Impreza Novice comp

Hey everyone,

Here's my entry for the novice comp.
What do you guys think of it?

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http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d138/kevindebruin/Wip1kopie_zps2mwqmm8l.jpg

Greetz Kevin
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Good design concept. What really stands out is the diffuser/exhausts. It looks stuck on because it has a completely different light source, and there's no shading or outline to account for it on the body.

Front arch is reasonably good, rear a little worse. The shapes are a bit inconsistent and flaky, and the color blending could use a bit of work. Important to note that with edges or gaps between panels there's never just one big highlighted edge or a darker one.

The vents in the bodywork are a bit dark, there's a good amount of ambient lighting. Rims look good in the preview, very blurry on high res.

Personal taste wise I dont care much for the brick wall. You could've cropped the image much better, cause it detracts from the car. If you then make the tarmac a bit darker, the car will pop out of the image.
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