my work for Novice Artists comp

this is my work for Novice Artists comp what do you think guys ??
base:
k1bwf65.jpg

chop:
FAnbrln.jpg
Post edited July 28, 2015 at 06:41:42 AM by ahmed2000
profile.jpg
sorry for my bad English
4.67 (3 votes)
nothing ?? <_< <_<
profile.jpg
sorry for my bad English
Hey, don't be disappointed, here's something.:)
I think it's nice, I like the color and I think that you did a great job with the smoke. :-d
ahmed2000 wrote:
nothing ?? <_< <_<

have more patience. the forum isnt active enough for quick replys all the time

as for the chop...
really digging that paintjob. its not something you see at all on chops and it looks awesome.

faults: the driver is overlapping the side window. need to make him look in the car.
shadow is wrong on the side.
need some shadow on the side vent. with the paintjob, it looks like it doesnt really exist anymore.

could of been better with more body mods but i like whats done and again, sweet paintjob. keep it up
Very nice livery and the idea overall :-d, but the car is generally of low quality and the smoke is unreal.
Cool!
River Post Projects
what do you think now guys and thanks for helping
profile.jpg
sorry for my bad English
I and a few of us have told you what to improve/change on the chop when u posted it on Facebook! I can't say more to me it's worth around 3-4/10...simply because you didn't listen to any of our advice and also because the chop is very bad!
are you say i don't listen to advice when i post the photo on face book but when they say for me change the bg and add the driver i do this and fix the smoke ido this and add the blur for the bg i add the blur and here say for me fix the shadow i try to fix it <_<
profile.jpg
sorry for my bad English
What have you changed? I see the same faults what i said
Back to top

Please login to post