Hi, so I started this one long ago and as I was going to the boarding school I decided to finish this one soon. I hurried to the finish so its not that good but I hope to create another version of it when I get back in may for a short vacation

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Chop:


Cheers

A bit toony at some parts, but I realy like it.
Nice wheels, nice color.
Looks more like a nice Kombi now hehe

still bit toony in some parts,.. but i see you are brushing it [that's the hardest]
keep it up the good work brother

Good try ChoppeR, good to see you brushing and chopping !

I think generally you have the right idea, you just need to use a few more different tones and add more detail to the chop.

1 The window being all black looks too toony, using a refrence you should select an area and then make it brighter, so you can see the seat and steering wheel and through the window

2 The brakes caliper should be on the same side front and back!


3 The bottom of the door should be darker, so I quickly used the burn tool on it.

4 Door panellines are not dark enough, it should always be darker then the colour of the car but never pure black.

5 The selection on the roof is a bit too sharp, when selecting with pentool or lasso, try and add a 0.3 feather edge and also the roof should reflect some light from the surrounding so I made it a bit brighter/ glow around it


Its all about experience and practice. So keep at it mate!