Mazda RX-7 "Goldust"

Hai guys.
Today i finish my new project.
Some copy, some brush. One of my favorite chop what I make.
Hope you like it too.
Comment please.

Base:
oijmgvkd.jpg
http://fs1.directupload.net/images/user/141211/oijmgvkd.jpg
Chop:
oegkda8t.jpg
http://fs1.directupload.net/images/user/141212/oegkda8t.jpg
Check my profile on:
Facebook | Flickr | ArtStation | YouTube
vr8sdlzc.gif
8.00 (1 vote)
it would be better if u had added a spoiler and fixed the shadow under the car :-d

bQws0lj.png
I add spoiler to him and it doesn't looking good <_<
Check my profile on:
Facebook | Flickr | ArtStation | YouTube
vr8sdlzc.gif
the sun on the background and the sun on the car reflections dont match, the rear wheel looks flat and the car shadow needs to be less dark
First off, the colour and paint looks great. very fitting on a rx7! :D

I noticed a few things though.
1 The shadow needs fixing, looking at the front of the car/ the backgrounds shadow comparing to yours which is way too soft, you need to make sure the 2 match
2 The far side bonnet line is missing
3 I see alot of Cyan/ green on the windscreen, I would lower the saturation a bit.
4 the door line on the back towards the rear wheel is very jagged, are you using pentool or line tool to draw the lines?
ITSLY5.jpg

Anyway, the image looks great though, just minor errors to look out for in the future!
ffkZ5K.jpg
Come join us on Facebook and Tumblr
Damn I forget that lines...
J_HUI wrote:
4 the door line on the back towards the rear wheel is very jagged, are you using pentool or line tool to draw the lines?
I make it with line tool, i try use that pentool but i still have problems with that.
Can you tell me how do it with pentool?
Check my profile on:
Facebook | Flickr | ArtStation | YouTube
vr8sdlzc.gif
1 person liked this.
Sure man, heres a tutorial I made back in 2010 to give you an idea how I do my lines
http://j-hui.deviantart.com/art/Shutlines-Via-pentool-171378963
ffkZ5K.jpg
Come join us on Facebook and Tumblr
Thank you a lot :-d
Check my profile on:
Facebook | Flickr | ArtStation | YouTube
vr8sdlzc.gif
Some comments more?
Check my profile on:
Facebook | Flickr | ArtStation | YouTube
vr8sdlzc.gif
really nice chop and it looks really sweet :-d
j_hui basically said what i was going to say so i wont repeat them.
what i also noticed is 2 random red dots on the tyres and the headlights need more work on them as they really stood out for me. keep it up
Back to top

Please login to post