Hi mates..my entry for the Classic Round 6.
Comments and cristism

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Rotiform <3 [found after submitting on my pc]

Rotiform looks better. Love autumn atmo!

Well.. it looks great. Gorgeous colour, a really nice design and a lovely atmosphere.

But you asked for tips and improvements, so here's what I've got:

• The whole image looks to be a rather low quality in HiRes, make sure you're saving the jpg at the highest quality possible. If you're having to lower the quality to keep the size down then just make the image smaller rather than losing quality.
• Both sets of wheels are a little bright, but especially the second pair.
• The door lines are partly transparent. If you're following the split line tutorial in the tutorial section, my advice would be it's not perfect. Reflections shouldn't show in the split lines.
• The horizon reflections should be slightly distorted either side of the split lines rather than flowing on perfectly.
• The car looks quite tall now - you've extended the kit more than lower it, so it seems a little strange.

Other than that a lovely looking chop - i'm particularly impressed with the flip up headlights - pulled off rather well indeed. I also prefer the first set of rims, but that's just me - I like dish

Keep it up

EDIT: If you post up the donors (for the paint) and update it with some of these fixes (main one being the quality) I may be in a position to consider a promotion. You've been producing some good chops recently.

The sideskirt looks terrible quality. Please work on the final execution, it undoes the otherwise good work.

Thanks a lot
I've learnt a lot from your feedback..mainly about the split lines and the quality of the image

I'm posting the donors here and a little update [donor image was 11mb ]


Update :

On the higher quality image the whole car looks a little toony , but good work on the brush anyway , looks like you have been putting a lot of effort working on it , side skirt maybe needs some reflections , front bumper looks too simple on the lightened side of it/the far side . I like the first wheels more tbh Nice work on the pop-eye lights , they really make the chop stand out.
PS > Make the far side of the front bumper just a bit darker and add some grass reflections on ottom part of it (from the background) I think this might work , good luck

sweet cool looking chop man I like it but I am not BMW fan <_<

Thank you .thanks for telling me where i made errors

wow nice BMW

Hmm, I love it! The Rotiforms are very nice, and nice atmosphere...congrats!