Alfa Romeo 159 WTB 2013 R2 Entry (Team Bosnia)

This is Entry from T. Bosnia for WTB 2013 R2
About 70% of brush and rest of it is C/P
Base is well known so no need to repost it again here

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High Res.
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Wips & Donors
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Post edited July 22, 2013 at 12:59:56 AM by Gile

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Congrats on second place in your division this round :D That makes up for the no-show in round one a little :D

What made this chop successful I think, was the clean and uncluttered design - it had substantial enough mods to make it clearly different, but they weren't over the top - they worked with the design to make it feel more bold and aggressive compared with the base.
Overall everything fits well too, just I think that the horizon with the skyscrapers needs to be moved higher up to fit the perspective of the chop :P

As for the brushing, it's not the colour I would have chosen, but there are clean and tidy selections, and the reflections seem to have been placed in the right areas. I just think the paint needs some more contrast, brighter highlights mainly, to make it feel that bit more glossy.

One of the main areas for improvement is with the split lines - firstly they have highlights all the way on both sides of the line, as if they are glowing - highlights would only appear on one side and only at certain angles (and depends on the direction of the image lighting). Not only that but the car reflections shouldn't show through them - they aren't stickers on the paint, but gaps in the paint - so there shouldn't be reflections of the surroundings in the gap

I think that's about everything - good luck and I hope to see an entry next round too :-d
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tnx for the feedback ATC and also tnx for those tips
and will improve those split lines ;)

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Congratz to you and your team for second place.Getting those points up! Kinda hard to comment after ATC he is so elaborate. If i could say anything it would be i love the chocolate bar on wheels!.
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