BMW vs Mercedes: the Chase

Hi everyone, this is the first time I post one of my chops :D
I made this for Advanced Round 4 'cause the theme excited me XD I hope you'll like it, but even more I hope in your help 'cause I want to improve the final result.
so, these are the two bases
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HR: BMW base

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HR: Mercedes base

and this is the chop
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HR: the Chase

the chop is even bigger (4900x2643) and I can't upload it XD
I'll wait for comments :)
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The ideas are cool , but i don't like the dust and the spoiler from Mercedes.In rest i like the theme,Very well worked.Good Job! :)
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thanks bro! :mrteeth:
I think I will change that spoiler, it's not of a good quality. what's wrong in the dust? :hmm:
Post edited June 14, 2013 at 03:42:27 AM by Mustang 4 Ever
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Because for me seems unreal :mrteeth:
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maybe too light? I don't know XD
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idea fuck face, but was small in bg, fumes are not so, the paintings also got a little unreal! There ae many things to get ready, this in the right way
sorry I didn't understand well XD what was too small in the bg?
btw, I tried some reflections to blend better the cars with the bg and changed the spoiler
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HR: the Chase
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I think the Mercedes came out great.

Your Police car scene needs a bit of work. Without going into fine details, your overall composition needs work. The car in the front being that close to the edge is hurting it. Also, that fence post/wood in the foreground is extremely distracting. I think that the police car ought to be slightly smaller and more of a secondary element.

I think that to help blend things a little better you may want to do a Color Balance Adjustment layer on top of everything as well as a Noise layer. I tend to do these two things as "final touches" on ANY composite I do, whether it's Sports, Automotive, Industrial etc., Unifying your color tones makes the composite look more convincing.
Post edited June 15, 2013 at 06:27:29 PM by josephnicklo
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thanks a lot for the help :D

so I'll move the cars to the left and reduce the BMW, trying something for the fence (it's originally in the bg) and add filters :)
Post edited June 17, 2013 at 11:57:09 AM by Mustang 4 Ever
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better?
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Post edited June 17, 2013 at 02:02:45 PM by Mustang 4 Ever
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