This is my first full brush ,its an old chop for a competition on romanian forum.

Not a bad effort I like the new wide kit, and aggressively styled front lights - they make it look much more imposing!
I think the front bumper could perhaps be styled to fit this theme a bit more, because now it just looks like the car is a little bit 'sad'. That being said, I admire the creativity

As for the brush, it's good to see that it's clean and tidy with nice sharp reflections - what needs a little work however is the tone and contrast, as it all looks a little bit oversaturated and toony at the moment. Try to have brighter highlights, and darker shadows, with colour that isn't so strong If you colour the base to green and compare, you will see what I mean:


In general:
1. - higher up where the paint reflects the sky, the colour is less saturated, and slightly bluer
2. - Where the paint is level, pointing at the same angle as the camera, the colour is more saturated and fewer reflections show - this is generally around the horizon line, and it should gradually start to get darker as the body curves downwards
3. - sometimes, when the body starts to curve down far enough, it starts reflecting the ground - this is particularly common in bright sunlight with light tarmac, so it should perhaps get lighter here. You will have to experiment to see what looks right.

Hope this helps

tnx a lot for comment ,i try to make more better chop, now i work on mazda 3