Hello, guys.
This is a rendering I made from an idea I had.
programs: 3D Studio Max + Vray and Photoshop



Vídeo Making Of:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lPx9YPYvZhA
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Looks pretty sweet tbh, I think there's only two areas that let it down:
->Water on the ground - it looks very 'thick' - almost like treacle, and when the wheels splash through it, it has a strange spray pattern in front of the tyre
->Rear rim looks to be a long way inside the bodywork - could do with a few spacers

Everything else looks great - nice atmosphere and composition - well done

Hey, ATC. thanks for you reply.
That's my first vehicular rendering haha.

Thanks for your critique, loved it.

Not bad for a first try :O (I think).
Can only agree with what ATC said.
BTW to me it looks like it's going to hit the wall next to the road, if it isn't already...
Other than that nice job.

The water puddles look weird because there's motion blur on the asphalt but still the edges of the puddles don't. At least not as much.

Also, you know how water puddles shrink when the water gets vaporized slowly? This leaves a slightly wet area between the dry asphalt and the water. Some specular and reflectivity around the water puddles (not as strong as on the puddles itself of course) would help achieve this.

Here's a good example on what I mean:

The wet asphalt reflects a lot more than the dry asphalt but not as much as the water puddle itself.