hello, long time no see. after long time, finally i've finished my chop. alright this is my chop....


Original:



Chop:


HR:
http://fav.me/d5zfl2w

i hope you like it :mrteeth;

The windows reflect nothing from the background and look toony. Leaving the original ones in place would've looked better.

Overall the paint is very toony, add more details, highlights and so on.
Also make sure that the highlights make sense and follow the shapes nicer.
Rear spoiler is a bit off angle.
Especially the wheels could've been done better. They aren't only smaller than the originals they just don't resemble wheels anymore, especially the rear looks very weirdly shaped.

Maybe try more basic mods and master those, move to brushing later.
No offence.

First up - great ideas It's not often that someone is brave/creative enough to try and create a burnout scene, so well done for that!
You've also had a reasonable attempt at creating a new kit of your own design, something else which should be credited.

However I think the brushing lets it down a bit - I guess we all have to start somewhere, so do not be disheartened, keep trying, but perhaps work up from smaller parts like bumpers etc.

You should look more at reference pictures - real photos of real cars, then you can see how the colour flows and changes over the car - try not to let the colour become to strong, which I think is what has happened here. You should also try and add extra contrast between light and dark.
This is something I did really quickly, just to give you more of an idea of what I mean:


Mine is definitely not perfect - it would need much more detail and tidying to look correct, but the most important thing is the overall lighting.
Keep trying though Good luck

I think it's a brave try, and i appreciate you made a very ugly car look cool
I know the path your on, wanting to make it perfect, ending up creating matte
and gloss in one paint ;-)
Blurry gradation creates more matte effect, while sharp contrasted lines and
surfaces create shiny glossy looks (correct me if i'm wrong Pro's)..
Perspective, wing is good for starter!!
Get going!

alright all, thank you for the comment.. i'll trying next time. and thank you atc for the idea (sorry for my bad english )