~~~W201 - bathed in sunlight

hi all, its been a while since my last post, so here i am with my last crap chop :D
i think you all familiar with the base, coz its from Mercedes Benz w201 for the competiton,,,enjoy...

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Under car shadow is incorect, seems like you benz is hanging in the air :D otherwise nice atmoshere and everything else. Keep practicing mate, good luck! :)
Why do you say it's your "crap chop"?
It's actually a very good chop for NCA, and almost worthy of a promotion to inter I think :D
You've kept the styling simple, but it looks completely different from the base and any other entries for this round - which is a good thing! Those lights with the wipers are an awesome idea! :)

The car seems to fit well on the backdrop, and the lighting of the paint matches nicely. However I think you need to darken the shadow a bit to match the tyres
You've also attempted some brushing, and it's good to see that the basics are there! :D The lighting and tones (the most important parts) that you've used seem to be correct - so you can only get better! Just try blending any harsh edges a little bit, like the thin white line along the top of the horizon reflection on the side.

The only major problem for me is that you seem to have added a lot of noise to the lower door/side skirt area, which doesn't really match with the rest of the car, which is very smooth and shiny
Other than that well done :-d Keep it up and believe in yourself!
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~thanks r3v0 for the comment, i've try darker than that but i dont like the outcome so i decide to lighten up a lil bit, but thank u, i'll notice it on my next chop :)

~thank u for all the comments and critics ATC, why i'm call this a crap chop, probably because in some parts theres not like I expected, such as the rear rims and tire, the refs on both of the fenders, and the last just like u said to much noise on the lower door area :D. yes i attempt brushing on some parts, mostly the body, refs, bumper, fog lamp and the headlight wiper :)

and thx again for the vote and support, it means a lot to me :D
Post edited January 04, 2013 at 05:08:07 AM by Rommster
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