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Tyres on fire are very unreal... The SUV has white line under itself... Sparks between the cars are too big... On the other hand they are nicely done under the Toyota (If you don´t mind that they should fly to the oposite direction) But there are some good ideas ;)
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thanks and this is my idea
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Firstly, I like your ideas. But I think they could have been a better execution of them. I can see some problems.
  • The front wheels on the '86. The effect you've added doesn't look that realistic.
  • The smoke on the rear wheels doesn't look realistic either. It wouldn't go around the way it does on this image. Try using references to make it look more realistic.
  • The way the bumper on the '86 is scraping the ground, I don't think that the sparks would be produced as it's not metal.. But I like where you were going with it. And I don't think they would be going in that direction, straight along the ground..
  • The bonnet on the '86 isn't looking too bad, but I wouldn't have put it an an angle like that. And with the blur it makes it look kind of fake.
  • The reflections underneath the cars is too harsh. Look at some references to try and get an idea of what they should look like.
  • Underneath the 4x4, there is the previous background that hasn't been removed. It sticks out like a sore thumb.
  • The car in the background, that's hit the mountains face, doesn't look like it fits. It's way to big. It would be alot smaller.

I didn't mean to nit pick, but I am pointing out areas on which you can improve on. I hope that the information and advice I gave you will help you to develop your level.
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