It's a long time ago for me to chop some cars but at least i get inspiration and begin an new chop so here it is!

orri


tune


greetz

Very cool! Nice touch with the removed headlights.

Only thing that lets it down a bit is the smoke, more specifically how it looks like near the car. The edge of the smoke should be sharper and there should be a sense of depth in the smoke how it gets hurled around the rotating tire and hits the wheel well and gushing out of the arches. At the moment it looks a bit like the smoke is just floating between the viewer and the car.

Here's a good reference although it's shot from a different angle:

http://kanokus.deviantart.com/art/Falken-Smoke-129422566

See how it looks like there are many clouds grouped together and how there's no smoke at the side of the car but instead it's only gushing out from the wheel well?

Nice chop nonetheless! It's got great attitude. Nice bg too.

Can't add much more to what olli said. Smoke is one of the hardest things to get right in a chop.

Otherwise, I think there are some more trivial mistakes... for example the windows lack reflections. Good work though

You have obscured the windows so as not to see the old background