Volkswagen Golf MkI project pt. "Looking for the Summer"
I doo all what i want in this car
I all brush besides wheels, background and rear lights.
Comment please
Base:

Chop:


W.I.P

The paint looks a bit saturated.
Wheels are turned clockwise too much but only by very little and only the rear one actually.
The top part at the rear seems to be crooked and has a big jaggy line in it. Some toony parts here and there but nice job though creating the summer'ish theme and brushing most stuff from scratch.

Thank you for comment

More comments??

i like the design..
too much work and its a really clean chop
brush is toon but good
keep it up

Brushed parts are lacking refs and the side ones are too strong. Where the roof is chopped it looks maybe too hard edged like its just cut and not finished off.
Nice attempt though and idea was good