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Post edited August 01, 2012 at 06:04:50 AM by kitinhof
4.00 (4 votes)
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kitinhof has some problems, the quality of the background is not very good and the wheels, missing shadow beneath the body, is to merge the light from the background with the car. But the cutting of the car was good.
The other thing you're posting your work in the wrong area, post them in the area "work in progress" here is already ready for work.
Post edited August 01, 2012 at 06:10:55 AM by Fenrrir30
Freestyle design
now I'll try to brush :D
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Fenrrir30 wrote:
kitinhof has some problems, the quality of the background is not very good and the wheels, missing shadow beneath the body, is to merge the light from the background with the car. But the cutting of the car was good.
The other thing you're posting your work in the wrong area, post them in the area "work in progress" here is already ready for work.


why vote 1?! he have 12 years old and i think he did a good job for new artist. Personally i Don't like the style of the rims but are well placed. Also the low are very good! :)
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good start keep it up.
http://www.autemo.com/forums/?t=15070 see this some brush in the optical
quality of bg is very great :P
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For me, personally- there are a few issues.
  • The background. It doesn't seem to fit with the angle of the car, and the quality isn't great. I'd say a better quality one is needed!
  • The wheels don't go with the style of the car. They don't look to good at all. They're also off angle, they aren't put like they would be. And the especially the rear one, it doesn't look at the right angle at all.
  • Where you have shaved the frond door handle, the colors don't really match and it looks alot lighter than what it should be.
  • There's no shadow under the car, and it looks like it's well- not there. Try remembering it next time!
  • The windows, the background through them should have been changed. It doesn't look like it's in the actual image.

I know I may have listed alot, and I know you may not be able to do some of the things yet as you're still learning, but you have done a good job on everything else. And I really like your ideas, so keep it up :).
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