Hmm, not my kind of style but hey, each to their own. I can see some little things wrong here...
- The brush, it is awesome- but there is something about it I just can't put my finger on... Th windscreen should be a little lighter I think, even if there is a tint.
- For me, and my personal tatse- I would get rid of the wing. Looks like one you'd find of a RWB Porsche? It looks to long, and at a weird angle compared to the rest of this image.
- The front wheel looks a little off to me, I don't know why- maybe you have changed the angle a little, but I don't know.
I think with this one, you went with RWB styling, which is good to see that you're trying new ideas- but RWB is Porsche. His styling won't suit anything else. Good to see that you're improving though, good job

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