here is my dart for a local competition.
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chop:

I like your ideas, but for me, there's a few problems.

• I know the look you were going for, and I really like what you'e done and all, but the amount of camber is stupid. But yet, there is a Celica that has I think, about as much angle as that so it can be done. Just doesn't look good. And especially on a Dodge Dart. But the wheels are an awesome choice, and suit the car well.
• The bonnet bra. I think it would be a little darker than that. Maybe a little more black. Just to fit in with the atmosphere and lighting.
• The convertible conversion is done well. But the seats are a little low quality. A higher quality donor would have made this come alive I think.
• I like the way that the car gets more blurred as it goes to the rear. But it looks off. The depth of field in the image is different to that of the car's.

But good work. The idea of a 4dr convertible is good. Now a company just needs to make one. Keep up the good work .

other comments?