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Freestyle design
5.00 (2 votes)
Meu amigo... Em primeiro lugar sê bem vindo... em 2° lugar reparei que colocaste uma serie de trabalhos aqui... Mas falhaste num ponto... Deves postar tambem a base... para que o pessoal possa fazer a comparaçao... e dar-te dicas em relacao a erros que haja para que nos proximos possas melhorar... De resto nao parecem muito maus... continua...

Aquele abraço... Black Boy... :-d
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Black Boy wrote:
Meu amigo... Em primeiro lugar sê bem vindo... em 2° lugar reparei que colocaste uma serie de trabalhos aqui... Mas falhaste num ponto... Deves postar tambem a base... para que o pessoal possa fazer a comparaçao... e dar-te dicas em relacao a erros que haja para que nos proximos possas melhorar... De resto nao parecem muito maus... continua...

Aquele abraço... Black Boy... :-d

Please, try and talk in english on here. Of if you write like that, then please put an english translation below it. Just as this is an english speaking forum :).

Question. Where's a base, or a link to the base?
Anywho! I am not keen on this, but each to their own. I think that the wheels are a little bit off though. The front rim looks like it's wonky. Too much tyre on the top, and too little on the bottom. It looks like you've used lens flare? That is something that doesn't look that nice used as a light. There's a special way to do that, and there's a tutorial on here somewhere to help you. Other than that, everything else looks good and for a new artist, it's done to a pretty good standard. So keep it up :).
I prefer engine oil and overalls to nail polish and fashion any day♥
KTB Design wrote:
Black Boy wrote:
Meu amigo... Em primeiro lugar sê bem vindo... em 2° lugar reparei que colocaste uma serie de trabalhos aqui... Mas falhaste num ponto... Deves postar tambem a base... para que o pessoal possa fazer a comparaçao... e dar-te dicas em relacao a erros que haja para que nos proximos possas melhorar... De resto nao parecem muito maus... continua...

Aquele abraço... Black Boy... :-d

Please, try and talk in english on here. Of if you write like that, then please put an english translation below it. Just as this is an english speaking forum :).

Question. Where's a base, or a link to the base?
Anywho! I am not keen on this, but each to their own. I think that the wheels are a little bit off though. The front rim looks like it's wonky. Too much tyre on the top, and too little on the bottom. It looks like you've used lens flare? That is something that doesn't look that nice used as a light. There's a special way to do that, and there's a tutorial on here somewhere to help you. Other than that, everything else looks good and for a new artist, it's done to a pretty good standard. So keep it up :).

Just like KTB sead try to speak english here!!!
There are a lot more mistakes than they are stated:
- windows are to dark
- CF look wierd
- lot of blury parts
- those crackas are looking like stiches
Like KTB sead "it is good for an new artist" but I think that u can do much bether. ;)
U have a lot of tutorial's in the tutorial section here on autemo and of course on youtube!!!

No hard feelings m8 ;)
Keep practising!!! :-d :-d :-d

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