PUT A FEW HOURS INTO THIS
first go at brushing so i thought id do a full brush .
BASE:

CHOP:

A pretty decent effort for a first full brush I have to say!

The side vent is the silliest part of this chop in my opinion. Why on earth would a front engined car need a vent that big to ventilate the rear of the car?

Otherwise:
- Rims don't quite match perspective wise. Both wheels look too far "turned in"
- Inner part of the front left vent is silver
- Seats need to be bigger
- Shadow needs work (looks too sharp); try my tutorial
- Car looks unrealistically low... I don't think it would even be able to turn the front wheel straight.
- Background looks very overexposed

Keep at it fellow Aussie... there are far too few of us around here

g'day
i wanted the vents silver but i did the right a bit to dark
and i am having trouble with finding rim donors . can never get the bloody right perspective do you know of some good sites ?
racing seats sit fairly low in commodores . but they do look fairly small in this
i actually got the idea of the side vent off a r35 skyline i saw . which also has the engine in the front .
the side vent may have something to do with the aerodynamics of the car ?


thanks for the tips anyway
aussie aussie aussie oi oi oi

Because racecar


Nah, to be perfectly honest, he has a point, but why do car parts always have to serve a function?
I agree largely with what Klaus said, but rather than repeat the small errors he pointed out, I thought I'd take this opportunity to praise your efforts!

There's a lot of good work, the general quality is very high, with neat tidy selections and a good variation in light and shade on the paint that means it doesn't look too toony My advice really would be to say keep at it and keep practicing, maybe try some simple outdoor reflections next - the simplest ones like on press images are essentially just the same, but with a little more variation in tone and colour over the paint to match its surroundings

Keep it up though

i didnt do the chop to make it functional i did it because i enjoy it and i did something different and i like it