Well after many good comments & tips, I brought some changes 2 it. Here's 2 diff. pics, one's w/ a side vent & the other w/out. I also changed the BG, since it did clash w/ the car in the first place!


Original:



Chopped Version:



Revised Versions:

simply stunning
I would've just put some lighting on the edge of the rear wing though

for your lights, i suggest putting linear light ... a 85% white 15% magenta colour just in the middle of that greenish light you have will make it that tad more amazing

through the window looks perfect!

nonetheless good work

nice job , looks good and cool bg change
a few things

the flag thing on the side i dont get , it doesnt have doorlines so what is it suppoosed to be ?
it kinda looks like a plastic thing stuck on rather then a decal like flag ?

also the car looks like a woman lifting her skirt up , why ? well the front bumper is way low and the side skirt area is way up high , that kinda looks weird , could easely be corrected bu moving the whole side more downwards , and that would make it look twice as brutal

rear wing is very black where the rest of the dark / black things are way lighter (should be more like the roof)

and well the fb vent area is very undefined , the lower hole is just superbright with no depth or mesh or .....

all ment well to help hey

Nice chop but rich is right about this

Thanx 4 the tips & comments guys. I'll work at it, 2 improve it & myself....Read my profile & you'll understand a bit better!

hi mate, I think rich said it all.
I'm not a fan of the design, I think the original is perfect, but still try to pull down the side to make it look more agressive

Haha good idea! But the details in HR are so bad... The whole front is unclear and the wing too. The turning on of the frontlights are bad too.

Watch out for the details! Change less with better details until you grow strong haha!
Keep it up!

Thanx again 4 ur tips & comments, sure does help!