Holden Monaro GTO

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^#1 Posted November 22, 2011 at 12:58:06 PM

here´s the Holden of the contest...
original:

Chop:

please R&R...
Thank´s

Post edited November 23, 2011 at 11:10:02 AM by IbIZa_BT

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^#2 Posted November 22, 2011 at 02:00:31 PM

Nice idea for the background,rims,and the grill..

but there is some green selection on the wheels edge.. keep it up

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^#3 Posted November 23, 2011 at 11:09:18 AM

thank´s mate...but just one coment?come on people please R&R so that i can improve my self

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^#4 Posted November 23, 2011 at 11:53:24 AM

fix tyre n ref be better..

good try

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^#5 Posted November 23, 2011 at 06:33:20 PM (Voted: 7.00 stars)

good chop

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^#6 Posted November 24, 2011 at 10:45:10 AM

thank´s mate

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^#7 Posted November 24, 2011 at 12:18:47 PM

good entry
good color change and i like the bg

its better to change the refs,i c jungles refs on a car which is in street!

grill idea is not bad,but its not fited very well i think

you have transformed the bumper but front left tyre is in the same place,you need to increase its arc
some thing like this
it helps the bumper to look more fited

good luck in comp
keep it up

Post edited November 24, 2011 at 12:24:56 PM by T_T_f

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^#8 Posted November 24, 2011 at 05:44:18 PM

thank´s fot the review mate...im sure it will welp to improve my self...

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^#9 Posted November 24, 2011 at 06:44:00 PM (Voted: 6.00 stars)

It's not correctly integrated :
- The BG can't be so blur
- The car is too light

And on the car, there few mistakes :
- You forget the shadows on the rear tire
- It's dirty in the left of the car

However, there are good ideas

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^#10 Posted November 29, 2011 at 01:29:25 AM (Voted: 8.00 stars)

I really like the changes you've made. Other than what has already been mentioned, the shadow under the left side of the front bumper is a bit messy.

Good work though, and good luck in the comp!

puszka321 wrote:

please video

MK211 wrote:

I really like the nos coming out of the rims

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