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Stance comp | advan

^#1 Posted October 07, 2011 at 12:11:29 AM

Hi guys....

Stance comp competition
Comments and criticism are appreciated!
Remove the spoiler... <_<

Base

Chop:

HR
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/8904/bmwstance2.jpg

Post edited October 07, 2011 at 12:54:06 AM by advan

8.00 (3 votes)

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^#2 Posted October 07, 2011 at 12:17:54 AM (Voted: 7.00 stars)

The all chop is to blury, rear wheel is low quality, there is no rear glass, and you could have worked more in the reflections.
still, it looks good, and I likethe style, but you gotta take that rear spoiler off.

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^#3 Posted October 07, 2011 at 02:00:33 AM

Great work!! Amazing color)) need some practice, but it good style

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^#4 Posted October 07, 2011 at 02:19:35 AM

great work

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^#5 Posted October 08, 2011 at 06:39:51 PM (Voted: 9.00 stars)

I like the ideas a lot!
Brush looks pretty good and the yellow/black combination works very well.
But the entire chop looks kind of blurry, especially the rear rim and the headlights bring down the quality.
The roof needs some refs, even if its just a brighter spot, from the light behind it and the front splitter should be lower. This kind of splitter usually is just about the ground, now it's even higher up than the sideskirt.

Post edited October 08, 2011 at 06:40:48 PM by samvesters