i hope its good and i hope to get tips and tricks
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could you please post the original next time and the chop in the thread with the direct link in [img]tags like this:

As for the chop:
There are some areas that you need to work on. The ideas are nice, but its the execution that needs the practice
->the wheels looks flat. Make sure you ALWAYS find wheels at the same angle as your base!
->take lots of time with your selections... if you look around the edge of your chop on the bg there are a lot of light coloured messy areas, and the rims have very untidy edges too. So take your time and make those selections as neat as possible

You should also avoid going over the top on mods, especially to begin with Clean and simple is always good, even at the highest of levels. So take your time, but don't give up!! Keep at it