Ok here we go...
Not too bad 4 starting up with brushing.
Here are the points, where something is wrong.....
- the lower vent in the center is not in the center.
- the area on the upper vent, where the refs should be is not complete
- the end of all vents is to hard. Should be fade out smooth into soft black.
- never use 100 % black for the dark place inside of a vent, cause only at
night, there is nothing to see.
- you have to work more clearer. everything loosk to spikey.
About the transparence bonnet...
Nice idea, but what you can see through a bonnet like this, depends on the
light, that is refelectet by the bonnet itself. Should be look more like a
smooth airbrush, with smooth edges.
Go go next project awaits
Sniper-X