MOVED: Golf III Autumn

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Full (little corrected): http://s13.radikal.ru/i186/1104/4d/12c8fa5a33b3.jpg
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The car looks cool and mods are good. But it looks like a sketch. You must pay more attention on details and lines. That is quite important if you want to make better works. You got the skills for it.
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Ok, man :)
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Nice original styling for this car. I am torn if it looks good or not, but clearly original. Also like the glow effects, and the depth blur, but you have added a bit too much blur on the backend, which doesn't fit with the depth of the shot. The leaves closest to the car could also be a bit sharper.

The main issue I can find is the rear-windows. They are too transparent, you should add some a layer there and fill it with the same grey color as the inner C-pillars. Now the contrast between the interior and the background seen through the windows is too great.

There are also an issue with the a-pillar... there is a red line there on the car left side on the front window that I don't think should be there.

Overall I like the style, but would be even better if you rebrushed the areas that are currently a bit grainy.

Cheers.
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