Nissan Silvia S15 Matte White

baseo.jpg

ots15003.jpg
0.00 (0 votes)
looks promosing , in a way imo it looks unfinished

i'll name some things maybe you can use them ?? :-d

the windows are too simple just blue need more maybe some cloud refs (not mirror like ...)

and all the black parts such as window moldings are superbright , same as everything else but the wheels and tyres are super dark and not lighted
also the color of the rims is a bit wierd since the enviroinment is all white

taillight are just desaturated , you could have givven the lenses bluw hue to make it more realistic or even make the lenses inside colored (thats what really brings them alive)

looking at the entire chop / pic i just feel its unfinished and there is a bit of everything but its not tied in

also maybe the wheel wells could use more shape above the edge like the ori had ..

all ment weel to help you :-d not to flame :P
mijnlogo.jpg
nice chop! but the colour too bright, I mean the body paint is looks to bright, thats makes some detail ruins, but it nice, as Rich said the rear windows shouldn't as simple like that, and last the rear bumper line looks like not sync between the right and left IMO... but it nice execution, keepitup.. :-d
Incredible chop! It 's a little toon, but overall good. To make it a bit 'more realistic, add some reflection at a very low opacity and show a little inside through the windows. The rest are all problems of light and shadow, which you must identify and correct...
gDq8RTH.png
DEVIANTART ---> http://teofilodesign.deviantart.com/
FACEBOOK ---> https://www.facebook.com/pages/TeofiloDesign/1428153794120016?ref=hl
FLICKR ---> http://www.flickr.com/photos/99049119@N07/
YOUTUBE ---> https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCtRlFSchgzeUCXSXVJu3aOw
This look good in white :D Good work :-d
larshasselberglogotype2.gif
larsgarage.webs.com
lojh.webs.com
larsbild.se (Coming soon)
First couple posts pointed out similar things that I saw. I'd add that some of your selections are jagged most easily seen at the bottom of the bumper and side skirt. Make sure you have a slight feather on your selections when making them.

Stick with it I agree its very promising. :-d
autemosig.png
It need of more work.
83765749.png
ooooo my eyes too damn white. :doh:
nervousp1.gif
LATEST CHOP BMW M3 CLICK!!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BeXft0jGgxk
Back to top

Please login to post