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The design is cool and I like the wheel choice. Color scheme is neat too, but the green is a bit oversaturated. Interior seems a bit bright in spots as well. All in all, decent chop. Keep it up

I like it, but is toon...

nice1. but you have some strange cuts over here over there. the engine is low quality
the front rim is a little bit off. and that black shape or whatever it is, it's fake. I mean the body has some shapes and the STRIPE ( let's say it like that ) has to mold on that shapes. I hope you understand what i mean

Nice work!
As far as pointers go, Luke_Jones and Clark Kent summed it up nicely.

Thank you for the comments

Nice work, it has some special touch, I don't know what it is. Background fits nice and the idea is good, there are just few flaws in execution.
- The donor parts, just as rims and engine is low quality, so that's gives it a bad look, so in future, try to find better quality donors.
- The green color is a bit oversaturated and it could use some more lightening and shadows, just to look more realistic.
- The rims look a bit off, try to rotate them next time so it stand more straight. Look on the donor pictures and try to ''copy'' the stance of the rims.

Don't take the comments as a negative, I'm just giving you some comments how to improve your work so you will become better soon

ah, my comment already said... haha.. well, its nice but need more works to make it real..