Scirocco

I was inspired by the Matt Black BMW that cloud did so decided to make my own version but with a VW instead was going to put in on Alphards but decided against it once saw it on the motor. Please post up your thoughts on the Chop. i didnt just desaturate the layer i did actually re-brush the bodywork.

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Post edited September 21, 2009 at 09:32:36 PM by weemanx2c
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I can see some bad selections in there, it kinda ruins the chop in my eyes.
Style is great tho!
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yh there are some bad selections, look around grille and the arches
alot of jaggy lines aswell
but nice attempt, keep it up
Zero wrote:
yh there are some bad selections, look around grille and the arches
alot of jaggy lines aswell

yeah that's what i meant, and also the roof and some other places around the car, look closer and you will notice it too.
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Good design... it looks desaturated, you don´t get the mate effect imo.
Keep it up
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i love this chop.
Could use some matte wheels though imo.
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As said, the selections aren´t that great. The rims fit well.
All in all, it´s more of a Quickchop.
Nice colour.
You know you wanna click it!
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Good work, but there are areas that could be improved. I'll elaborate as I want this to help you in your future chops. Areas such as the grille has quite rough selections, as a few have pointed. In fact most of the front bar has jagged selections. Just make sure you use the pentool to do selections if you aren't, and also make sure the anti-alias setting is used. Even though its matte, it should still suck up some colour from the surroundings, some blue hue from the sky would have been just what it needed on the upper parts of the car. And the bonnet is the slightest shade of black different from the rest of the car, hardly noticeable to some, but its these elements that matter most in terms of realism. And the bonnet believe it or not is what I noticed first.

But all that is just being superpicky. Don't let it detract or discourage you from anything, use the information to your advantage. You've actually done some great work getting it this far, and i'd just like to see you take it that little bit further with attention to detail in the future ;)
The selections are bad and need some colored refs, but nice idea
you cna find some tutorias to do the black color realistic
cya dude
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