MOVED: Seat Leon
Global Rank: 0th (344pts)
Reg: Nov, 2009
Romania
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Global Rank: 0th (955pts)
Reg: Aug, 2009
United Kingdom
Like I said in your other thread the other day, you neeed to do better or you'll be demoted.. Well in this case you have been knocked down to New Choppers until you can work on clean works and details. This chop has too many careless mistakes and looks like you rushed it out as a chop to post it rather than worry about what you need to look out for.
Rims are terrible quality. Front one is off and the front tyre looks glossy which is the wrong type of tyre. Rear tyre is to wide and it looks like its floating. Rear one also doesn't fit. Tbh looks like you've put indoor rims on an outdoor car.
Front arch is extremely toony but least it's clean. However the rear arch is just terrible. I don't know whats went wrong here. Also at the bottom of the rear arch near the rim there is a gap, should have filled this in black. Same with the front arch, you can see the car underneath from when you lowered it.
Front bumper has bad selections where their edgy and the highlighting colours are wrong. Front left light is terrible quality and very messy. Due to you making that light more smaller you forgot to tweak the right light. Intercooler looks very saturated and fake and it would have been better if you have of put an intercooler pipe in the black vent on the bumper. Because you have changed the kit on the car, the ground shadow would need to change, but you haven't even considered thinking abou that. AND worst off, one veery silly stupid mistake... You NEVER cropped the top of the chop image after lowering it.
So many mistakes man and you have to now understand why I have demoted you. It'll take you to really impress me before you consider getting yourself promoted back up again. Look out for mistakes, don't just post it and think "Oh this is my third posted chop this week". Choppers like more works that are clean, and have awesome details. If you keep rusing your works and kicking out new chops everyday your not going to get much feedback as their giving you advice and they'll feel your not listening. You gotta make mistakes to learn what mistakes you've made.
Hopefully you'll improve after this one. Good luck on your next chop.
Rims are terrible quality. Front one is off and the front tyre looks glossy which is the wrong type of tyre. Rear tyre is to wide and it looks like its floating. Rear one also doesn't fit. Tbh looks like you've put indoor rims on an outdoor car.
Front arch is extremely toony but least it's clean. However the rear arch is just terrible. I don't know whats went wrong here. Also at the bottom of the rear arch near the rim there is a gap, should have filled this in black. Same with the front arch, you can see the car underneath from when you lowered it.
Front bumper has bad selections where their edgy and the highlighting colours are wrong. Front left light is terrible quality and very messy. Due to you making that light more smaller you forgot to tweak the right light. Intercooler looks very saturated and fake and it would have been better if you have of put an intercooler pipe in the black vent on the bumper. Because you have changed the kit on the car, the ground shadow would need to change, but you haven't even considered thinking abou that. AND worst off, one veery silly stupid mistake... You NEVER cropped the top of the chop image after lowering it.
So many mistakes man and you have to now understand why I have demoted you. It'll take you to really impress me before you consider getting yourself promoted back up again. Look out for mistakes, don't just post it and think "Oh this is my third posted chop this week". Choppers like more works that are clean, and have awesome details. If you keep rusing your works and kicking out new chops everyday your not going to get much feedback as their giving you advice and they'll feel your not listening. You gotta make mistakes to learn what mistakes you've made.
Hopefully you'll improve after this one. Good luck on your next chop.
