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^#1 Posted July 22, 2010 at 10:45:08 PM

So,3 days working on this baby,i like it very much
there is brush in some area and a lot of c/p
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http://www.autowp.ru/pictures/renault/clio/autowp.ru_renault_clio_3-door_9.jpg
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Post edited July 22, 2010 at 11:02:25 PM by veky_boy96

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^#2 Posted July 22, 2010 at 10:52:04 PM

no, not pro
it is completely wrong lighting and it is toony
ideas are nice though

^#3 Deleted Post July 23, 2010 at 10:38:47 AM by BCS

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^#4 Posted July 23, 2010 at 10:38:47 AM

The ideas are nice and the brushing isn't too bad if you had of added more depth to the paint. You have a serious amount of flaws with this.

* Rims are far too small; rear one is also off.
* It looks un-finished due to no side mirrors.
* Background through the windows have neem badly done.
* Hood pins don't reflect off the grille, you need to add some shadow there.
* Carbon on the arch could be a bit sharper.
* Intercooler fits, but the underneath parts don't; too long on the right side.

Next time pay attention to details. Good luck.