Gotta be honest with you, it looks more like a wip than a finished car, there are no shut lines anywhere, the back wheel is a bit off and like the others have said, its very very toony. You should try more basic colours like grey, white, anyting that doesnt reflect that well so you can concentrate on getting the gradients and colour variations right, not to mention fitting the shut lines in the lights look cool though and i like the effort youve made, just take alot more time and follow tutorials, you could even move this to the WIP section to get even more help, i think with a good length of time taken and some help from the more experienced choppers you could make this a badass update and would be a way better chop. BTW we can tell you rushed this because the blue golf you did was way better than this
