my viper

hi guys, i made one viper this time, let´s see what you find about it

base

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and here comes my work


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i turn to white and paint some parts as white also
i decide to not put spoiler cause i dont´t like spoiler on viper
the rims are diferent cause i want to make a diferent combination


soo.... is up to you guys to judge and tell me your opinions
cheers
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Not bad, I like the blown look on it and the choice of background, it suits the car well :D

As for the constructive criticism, I like the blurred rear end, but the rear wheel needs to be a little blurred also and the perspective of the front is a off. It looks like its either got a busted suspension or the right corner is in a hole. Also the blower is off by just a little bit, nothing big, but the reflections on the hood/bonnet shouldn't be "bent" like that, should be straight :)

I have no intention in sounding like an ass, that's just my opinion in pointing out the flaws I see. Just keep practicing :D
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02turbo wrote:
Not bad, I like the blown look on it and the choice of background, it suits the car well :D

As for the constructive criticism, I like the blurred rear end, but the rear wheel needs to be a little blurred also and the perspective of the front is a off. It looks like its either got a busted suspension or the right corner is in a hole. Also the blower is off by just a little bit, nothing big, but the reflections on the hood/bonnet shouldn't be "bent" like that, should be straight :)

I have no intention in sounding like an ass, that's just my opinion in pointing out the flaws I see. Just keep practicing :D

+1

But still no Pentool alot of jagged lines. The front wheel has too much positive camber and rear wheel is to big.
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thanks guys for your comments each one of you :-d
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Haha, you´re crazy! :omg: :mrteeth:

Great idea imo, for sure crazy but here again, why not!?
First, the BG fits good and looks good.
The new wheels are cool as well, especially the rear one!
Personally, white is one of my favourit colours for cars, so this is good, too. ;)
Now to the crazy part, the blower...
I really love to see it in this car, I think it suits in a way.
As already said, it isn´t 100% right perspective and the reflection isn´t perfect.
And if you look closely some parts aren´t the best quality, maybe just work a bit more accurate.
The bloom is okay here, but I think you don´t have to hide anything so imo you could think about leaving the pics without it (or only a very soft one).

Very cool chop, keep it up buddy! :)
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