2 day work on it, rate if you can please
there are somethings that are not good on it, i just couldn't do anything to them, i gave up

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Chopped

good chop and well done for trying but there are quite a few faults. i know your trying to get into brushing and i think you should start with brushing bumpers, vents and side skirts like i said and master that a bit more before trying to brush full cars with 2 tone paint jobs etc.

Okay thanks Zero

also remember to use the work in progress section to post wips and get help

i'll have a look

As Zero said, the work in progress (WIP) section is a useful tool - you can post up part finished chops as you are working on them, and get feedback to update and improve it before you finish

As for the chop, very cool design - I can imagine an actual rally car like this
Try to focus more on the paint though - it's more or less one shade of the colours and lacks the reflections
If you look at a reference (or even just the original image), you will see that there are big contrasts in the colours you see due to reflections - in some areas the paint looks a very light shade of pink - in others it is a dark red. If you can include this sort of shading in your brushing work it'll make it look much better

Keep it up

yeah i know something isn't right but i'll do better next time and thanks ATC, i'm so glad that you are helping me