I made this chop of this Beetle, tuned by some friends at Cambiocorsa Performance, which ran the Final round in this year's Italian Time Attack Challenge, and placed 2nd in their class (FF-R). The car has about 350HP and it's FF. It started as a quickie, but it turned into a proper chop. Everything but the wheels is brushed. The body is rebrushed in some little areas.
Hope you'll like it.

Base:

The Evo IX aside has 600HP, and the guy near to it is its owner and my neighbour

Chop:


Herbie Bonus:


Bye.

Ok... Time for some comments?

I really like the idea, overall the chop is nice , but in many parts of toon and unreal

Thanks in particular? Do you mean the shape of the wheel archs?

I think you've done a fantastic job with the beetle, it looks great!

Love how you transformed it into a studio style photo as well with the background.
Theres a few things to look out for though.
-Some areas such as the inner arch or the windows aren't perfectly round. looks like it was done with the lasso tool?
-The door/ bonnet lines need to be a bit thicker
-it needs an interior!
Taking jack's r34 as reference http://th04.deviantart.net/fs48/PRE/f/2009/186/0/8/__jackdarton___full_brush_by_jackdarton.jpg

I think you've done a great job though, keep it up!

Thats a great brushing, and I love the look of the car. Volkswagen badge and the licence plate have a very toony loo and those black dots you have on the bumper don't look good. Other than that, great work!

Ok, thanks for the critique. Those aren't some very heavy work of correction, maybe I'm gonna fix that issues

For unreal I mean the headlights and the lines of the doors and hood.

You're right, I made them in a hurry

Nice chop, but that plat it don't look so good there.