2 Years in the making. That\'s how long its been trying to create my own car.
I present to you the Argon-1. This project is 95% brush 5% Donor. It may not be perfect but its what I invisioned. I am very proud of this project. I would like to thank the Autemo community because with out you this would be unachievable. with out further ado Argon-1. I welcome C+C.

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http://imageshack.us/f/255/argon19.jpg/

Takes a bit of courage to do a concept. I think the main criticism I could give you at this point is on the sense of proportion and perspective. I dont think those are unfixable either.

At the moment you've got a very high shoulder, that meets up with the hood and windows near the A pillar. This while there's no real shoulder line to speak of. It's all a bit soft. This is further confused by the rear, which seems to sort of just end without curvature or form.

As for the front onto the skirt it doesn't feel very consistent. The bumper, the arch vent and the skirt are all different styles. And they dont quite line up either, which breaks the consistency even more. And once again that rear bit is a real weakness.

Wheels need to go. They dont suit it, they are much too large and above all the quality and hues are off.

I dont know if the grey arches are a design choice. But compared to the skirt which looks relatively "premium" and complex, they look out of place. Perhaps it's better to say it's the skirt which looks out of place.

Try to continue on from here, put down some bolder lines and check them against a perspective grid. The brushing's quite good for intermediate standard but things need to be in proportion just a bit more. And get rid of those white highlights.

Thanks Construct I new going into this i would have those perspective issues. I can agree with everything you said because you know your shit. I thank you for your critics. they will continue to let me grow.