Most of u guys saw my entry for round 2
there vere some minor mistakes, now they are fixed tnx to X-Raited Creations and on his Constructive comment
here is that link from his comment i.imgur.com/9FBGx4z.jpg
this is an update with an old version of my entry



HR
http://www.upload.ee/image/3180069/g35.jpg
HR of old version
http://www.upload.ee/image/3143301/baseimage122412.jpg

My old post is deleted
so commentc and critics are more than welcome so as the rating stars
regards
gile

muuuuuuuuuuch better now!
didn't like he first version and thought: ough

but with the bugfix and the new color-touch it's still perfect

Tnx m8
would be great if this one is in the competition not that old version
but cant update it now it is to late for that

i agree the new update is much better compare to previous one, only thing that bugs me is the side looks a bit straight maybe if you add little bit more lines it would go away, other than that awsome chop mate

Wowzers - where have you been hiding this?
I must say, it's a very well executed chop, with some nice brushing and atmosphere

Very few errors too, I'd say the biggest thing stopping this being a truely awesome chop is the door lines - they seem to faint, and sort of let the other reflections show through too much - try and make these a little more defined and noticable

Something else that would help, would be to distort the reflections a little where they meet the door line - right now it seems as though they flow straight across which looks a little fake

Other than that very well done This looks better than the "old version" and seems to be pulled together much more nicely on the whole, with a good choice of backdrop and rims
Keep up with the good work

Really tnx on feedback ATC
and i will have those things on my mind on next chop
- door lines
- and distorted refs
really tnx
all of your comments are well appreciated