Mini Coupe_OptimaL

hi guys,

this is my decent chop after pause :) hope you like it

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chop:
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sorry for my bad english :)
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It's a little blurry and i don't understand this passenger windows :)

But i like it :D 7/10
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Dzela wrote:
It's a little blurry and i don't understand this passenger windows :)

But i like it :D 7/10
why you did not voted? :-q
btw I like that Opti ;)
The headlights turned on doesn't look very realistic.
Background seems to be in the wrong angle compared to the road.
Nice job on the rest of it.
Agree with Brian ^ Backdrop doesn't really fit - the perspective is too extreme

Some cool ideas though - I like how you've tried to make the new reflections match the surrounds on the side, but I feel this also needs doing around the front, where the lighting still looks a little artificial

The rims are also a bit too orange, especially when you compare them to the rest of the side
Good effort though :-d
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There are a few problems but the atmosphere is quite nice. Rear wheel and arch should be bigger and the car should be a bit more yellow. Also under the front that shadow is not perfect.
Thanks guys, but with the background i have done nothing :)
sorry for my bad english :)
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ATC Design wrote:
Agree with Brian ^ Backdrop doesn't really fit - the perspective is too extreme
Opti wrote:
Thanks guys, but with the background i have done nothing
First of all I agree with ATC and Brian.
Imo car looks like it is sliding across the road 4especialy the rear end of the car
an thats what they are saying thats off.
Post edited March 27, 2013 at 01:04:35 PM by Gile

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