any comments?

you're new artist, why do you post in intermediate?
this looks like a wip to me, what is this supposed to be, a toon? a chop?

why are u getting so serious about where to place things? toon.

If it's a toon I suggest you brush everything like the wheels, taillights and exhaust.

You are a New Artist, so post in the New Artist section. Just be patient, you will get promoted if an admin thinks you are good enough to be...

thanks matt i did brush the exhaust but i see what u mean about the wheels and tail lights