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My first chops :D

My first chops :D

#1 Posted February 16, 2012 at 04:01:12 PM 
Base

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CHOP (Method: copy & paste)

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Base (Method: Rebrush and Brush (first time))

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Chop (Method: Rebrush and Brush (first time))

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Base
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Chop (Method:copy & pasteand Rebrush)

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Base
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Chop (Method: copy & paste)
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Comments pls ^^
Post edited February 16, 2012 at 05:19:40 PM by djlupix
5.75 (4 votes)
#2 Posted February 16, 2012 at 04:24:02 PM  (Voted: 3.00 stars)
Not bad, but car is in the air, and glass is bad...
#3 Posted February 16, 2012 at 04:29:45 PM  (Voted: 6.00 stars)
MjuS wrote:
Not bad, but car is in the air, and glass is bad...
Is this a good reason to give him 3 stars?? :/
Anyway there are some mistakes, but overall the chop is quite good. You have just to correct the color that is over saturated, make a better shadow under the car and give less darkness to the glasses! ;)
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#4 Posted February 16, 2012 at 04:38:51 PM  (Voted: 6.00 stars)
MjuS wrote:
Not bad, but car is in the air, and glass is bad...
This is an old chop, chop you see past that fact, however, did not need them you gave 3 :-q
#5 Posted February 16, 2012 at 05:46:13 PM 
I have my opinion and you have your, what the problem? OMG :S
#6 Posted February 16, 2012 at 07:12:29 PM 
MjuS wrote:
I have my opinion and you have your, what the problem? OMG :S
no, you did well to give your opinion, but 3 is a little bit.
#7 Posted February 17, 2012 at 06:59:52 PM  (Voted: 8.00 stars)
ddd racing wrote:
MjuS wrote:
I have my opinion and you have your, what the problem? OMG :S
no, you did well to give your opinion, but 3 is a little bit.

What he's trying to say is that these are his first chops and its a little demotivating to just give him a 3 and pick up on too faults but not mention the good or how to fix the faults.

The chops are quite good, and you have very nice idea's:D. as for the 350z (as its newest), as the car is floating due to the background being off perspective and the car is a little over saturated so next time i suggest turning that down :-d, also changing a white/silver/black car is muh harder that colored cars :-d The windows are abit to dark and when the windows are darker the reflections need to be stronger :-d.

As the 350z seems to be your most reason i will only comment on that one, keep up the good work... 7 stars
#8 Posted February 18, 2012 at 02:00:22 AM 
ddd racing wrote:
MjuS wrote:
Not bad, but car is in the air, and glass is bad...
This is an old chop, chop you see past that fact, however, did not need them you gave 3 :-q

i think it's good he rated them 3, if every chop was rated 10 then what good is there?

Yes it might be a bit demotivating, but at least it's honest.
But teaching him how to improve, link to tutorials will be very good and much more appreciated :P.

For example
-The windows shouldn't be a black colour fill, it should be a grey, that you can see through the seats Like this tutorial my friend made http://www.autemo.com/forums/?t=4801

-the carbon texture on the 350z is way too thick, you should paste a much bigger pattern so when you resize it, it will be more smooth and thinner
http://j-hui.deviantart.com/gallery/23649930#/d2hvsyu

keep chopping mate :-d
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#9 Posted February 18, 2012 at 10:45:46 AM 
Thx for the tutorials :D
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