Mini Cooper!

Hi my last chop!

Base:
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Chop:
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HD:
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Byee!! :D
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No comments? :(
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well , some things look really nice

but overal its full of mistakes and sloppy things , i guess you should have taken way more time to perfect it

some pointers >

> the front wheel is wider then the rear (the lip) that looks weird

>then what is all the stuff on the bonnet ? it kinda looks like flames (?) but then again its very undefined

>the rear wheel is sloped inwards , its alkmost looks like somebidy crashed into the rear wheel and its damaged

> front bumper is cool but in a way it looks really off , mainly due to the big vent with ic. you also have a indicator on the right but not on the left the shape should be visible since it runs onto the main vent on the right
also on the left there is a round vent beside the small vent and on the right tehre is not
those things all make it look off
>what happened to the doorhandle ?? its on the doorline instead of on the door

>its cool to make a side window that looks half open / closed but it looks way off like its not in line with the side / doorframe
also the front window and rear side window are tinted (heavy) and the opened window
is superbright

>shade is light but on the right under the bumper its suddenly way dark with a very dark tyre
thats also where the arch go''s into a sort of thick part and is lower then on the left

so those are the things for me you should pay more attention to on the next chop , get everything more balanced and the same and work on angles , that's the stuff that can make you improve / grow a lot :-d
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looks quite good overall but there are too many angle problems in my opinion...by these i mean the wheels, the bumper, the bg, the windows and some of the reflections are also off...
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