slk comp by: t_b 2008

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^#1 Posted January 25, 2012 at 02:25:34 AM

hi
Here last chop me on the Mercedes SLK comp
I am tired him too and tried to make it realistic
I hope that you like
ORG
http://www.autemo.com/dc/comps/1/7QI5N/60/data/19596108.jpg
chop

Full resolution
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/813/17652741.jpg/
comments please

Post edited January 25, 2012 at 02:26:34 AM by t_b 2008 ls

8.50 (2 votes)

Klaus

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^#2 Posted January 25, 2012 at 04:29:29 AM (Voted: 8.00 stars)

Not bad! Most of the brushwork is quite nice actually!

Problems I see:
- The body work seems rather boxy and sharp. I'd suggest trying to use a little more feather for some of the body lines, particularly on the vents at the front
- The side skirt is done quite poorly in comparison to most of the brushing
- Most of the SLK's body lines have disappeared which can be a bit of a problem when brushing without specific reference
- Shadow is a bit dark and sharp. It also needs a little bit of feathering and some lower opacity

What I like:
- Most of the brushing and reflections are quite good
- Some of the kit changes, especially the lower carbon inserts in the front lip

Overall it's quite a good effort. Keep it up and keep improving!

8/10